tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3861290694056761813.post7849267067625510349..comments2009-11-06T16:36:12.234-08:00Comments on The D Word-Because Your Parents Still Do It!: Critique Please!Daniellihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08227591890878500580noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3861290694056761813.post-36685442338178933022009-03-15T22:42:00.000-07:002009-03-15T22:42:00.000-07:00click for critique video Please put a horizon line...<A HREF="http://vimeo.com/3680963" REL="nofollow"> click for critique video </A><BR/><BR/>Please put a horizon line in or indicate where the ground is.<BR/><BR/>I would have liked to have been able to add some more frames into your animation to: "sell" the chef bounce a bit more to amplify the impact of the chop; to separate out a contact and follow through breakdowns on the chop for the knife; to consider a breakdown in the arc of the chop (to make an arc; a last point of contact as the chef leaves the ground just after the chop; a contact with the ground pose on the chef landing, then another squash, then a settle back into the last pose.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for putting some work forward to critique.frankhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12222027220337107714noreply@blogger.com