Sunday, March 15, 2009

Critique Please!

Ok guys hit me with it! i know it needs fixing, mainly around the hat and the little jump at the end but i want to hear some opinions before i go nuts with the wacom. this is for Janes class by the way.


1 comment:

frank said...

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Please put a horizon line in or indicate where the ground is.

I would have liked to have been able to add some more frames into your animation to: "sell" the chef bounce a bit more to amplify the impact of the chop; to separate out a contact and follow through breakdowns on the chop for the knife; to consider a breakdown in the arc of the chop (to make an arc; a last point of contact as the chef leaves the ground just after the chop; a contact with the ground pose on the chef landing, then another squash, then a settle back into the last pose.

Thanks for putting some work forward to critique.